SJ SMACK DOWN

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September 10th, 2009, 4:22 pm

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Fiery arrows of death!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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darknlight
Posted by darknlight
September 10th, 2009, 4:22 pm
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The swearing is censored simply because I don't know what coco would say, so I'll leave it to everyone's imagination:P. I was falling asleep when I made this. I'm actually really tiered now so all I'll say is Eat fire arrows coco! Midori it's your turn.


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Posted by MidoridislikesSJ
September 10th, 2009, 6:45 pm
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so awesome!!! I'll be sure to have a reply up as soon as possible (and you draw coco just fine... she looks like a) a person and b) a girl, so it's all good xDD)

I can tell that this fight is going to be amazing...



Pyroman
Posted by Pyroman
September 11th, 2009, 12:43 am
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Haha this is awesome, I can't wait to see the reply!

Just as a side note, you guys can have as much or as little dialogue as you wish; there are no rules against it. Perhaps the only reason there was so little of it in the original story arc was that me and FoD just wanted to get to the action asap!

Hopefully everyone, including future authors, makes this comic their own, rather than feeling like they have to follow some pre-set pattern.



Oblivion12
Posted by Oblivion12
September 11th, 2009, 12:49 am
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Will do ^_^



Mr Aids
Posted by Mr Aids
September 11th, 2009, 5:03 am
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There could be better text bubbles being used.

Everything else looks good so far.



darknlight
Posted by darknlight
September 11th, 2009, 11:23 am
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Lol I'm glad freedom of character speech has been approved :D , and I ca improve the speech bubbles easily once I get time.



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